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[nobleclaw]

Your Username: nobleclaw

Name: Nobleclaw
Clan: SkyClan
Occupation: Warrior

Appearance: Sleek white fur with black tabby stripes. He has pale blind eyes that glow with righteousness and heroism. He has large muscles that ripple through his fur, a darker greyish mane, and a little plume on the end of his tail; he resembles a lion.
Personality: Nobleclaw, like his name suggests is noble to his clan and will fight for it no matter what, unless a total tyrant is in charge or something bad like that. He has good morals and he would never kill a cat, even if the cat is from VenomClan.
Past: he was born blind and his parents, who he never met, abandoned him in the little cave they lived in. A hungry crow then searched the cave for some food and found the helpless blind kitten. The crow snatched the unnamed kitten and flew off. In mid-air, he bit the crow's leg and the bird released him. He fell down onto the snow and survived, only to be found by SkyClan. He was named Noblekit because he was strong and survived and gained an unwavering loyalty to SkyClan.
Other: He's blind, but he can still fight and run around like a normal cat. His two flaws are that he's blind and that he is not loyal to other clans.

[VANESSA]

There's several things wrong with this bio:
- Your first character can't be blind. To have characters with handicaps/disabilities, you need to be an active member who has filled the Disability form.
- Your character's personality is cream of gary-stu, which means he is too perfect. It is also a too flat.
- Your past isn't realistic.
- Blind cats can't fight or run around like normal ones. What would be the point of having a blind cat if they were the same as any other cat?
- Nobleclaw can't be your cat's name. I've explained this on your welcome thread.

Denied, you'll have to redo your entire bio.

[Nightface]

Also, I'm pretty sure that a white cat with black stripes is impossible. I'll have to ask Rain about it.

[nobleclaw]

ACCEPT HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

- I've started out with blind characters on many cites! Not accepting this dude would prove how strict and stupid this site is!
- I already said that his two flaws are that he's blind and that he's not loyal to other clans! THOSE ARE FLAWS!!!!!!!!!
- I think my past is realistic because I used to have a pet hamster name Chirpy and he was picked up by a raven. The next day my parents found him at the local pet store and he was unharmed! The only thing that was different about him was that he seemed a bit bigger, but that's probably because he grew muscles!
- I once roleplayed as an apprentice and my mentor was blind but he heard everything going around him and could smell everything going around him!
- Nobleclaw is his name and that's that! If you aren't fine with it then I'm going to assume that you're jealous because I thought of it first! Eveningfall can't be ur cat's name because cats don't know english words!
- I've been on sites were the bios have tidles and colons! Freedom of speace woman! This is America!

THIS IS AMERICA I CAN DO WHAT I WANT BECAUSE IT'S AMERIACA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVEN CHIRPY AGREES WITH ME THAT I CAN DO WHAT I WANT BECAUSE HE KNOWS THAT THIS IS AMERICA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[nobleclaw]

Also! You'r henchmanwomandude is wrong about Nobleclaw's fur being wrong! His mother was a white tiger and his father was a maine coon whose father was a lion so he can existes!!!!!! HE CAN EXISTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By the way, Nightfart, your little dog-type-thing with the swirly blanket looks ridikewlous!!!! RID-IH-KEW-LOUWSH!!!!! I'd be a very sad womun if I lifd in ur bodee!!!!

[VANESSA]

- Too bad. This isn't one of the sites you've joined before.
- They're not personality flaws, and all cats aren't loyal to enemy Clans.
- Ravens and crows are different. Ravens are bigger. I can imagine a raven picking up a newborn kit, then eating it. Sorry to say that might be a different hamster you found.
- Your mentor must have been a gary-stu.
- Yeah I'm pretty jealous ): But you still can't have a name like that. And Eveningfall is a perfectly canon name, as cats know morning, dawn, dusk, night, and twilight. I also know they mention 'evening' in some dialogue.
- I'm in Canada. I'm smarter than you by several IQ points; it's proven.

And also;
- White tigers and maine coons can't interbreed together because they're not in the same species. They're in the same phylum, but that's about it.
- I'd be a very sad woman if a series of coloured pixels came out of me too.

Alright?

[nobleclaw]

- Well it should be!
- Ya they are! If he's not loyal to the other clans then he won't be able to help them and if he's blind he won't be able to see!
- Well I meant to say it was a raven! Also, my hamster is Chirpy because that's his name!
- Hibiscus-storm was not a gary-stu! He was a legend! He saved the forest!
- cats know what being noble is, so im goin to use it.
- In America we have California, Obama, Big Macs, and flags so we're automatically more awesome than everything!
- tigers and lions can have ligers, so that MUST mean that cats and big cats can have baby kittens!

I'M RIGHT AND U R WRONG! HA HA HA *sticks tongue out*

[VANESSA]

- warriorclans.prophbb.com < is that the site your taking about? Anyway, this site is obviously different.
- Those are physical and moral flaws. We're talking personality here.
- Okay, but the raven would have still eaten the kit.
- That's what a Gary stu is. Even Jesus had anger issues.
- Its not a canon name though. We keep true to the books.
- I was born in California. Two summers ago I thought it was cool that I was born in Liberal Hippie Land so I made a point of it. But we have flags and big macs and a province with hot temperatures and hippies
too.
- Even though tigers and lions can breed, they had to be forced by humans. They're not in the same species because ligers are infertile. So a tiger and a cat wouldn't be able to breed. In fact, the tiger would have eaten the cat.

[Rainwater]

umm... WAT.

nightsong is right about your cat being genetically impossible. =)

...of COURSE a lion can't breed with a housecat! do you even know where babies come from? (sorry mods but..) a lion would KILL a housecat if they tried to breed! even if that did work, the kits would be much too big for the mother, who would die.
tigers also can't breed with housecats.

also, all clan cats belong to the same species.

please go back to elementary school biology.

now, as for the rest of it... THIS IS THE INTERNET. IT IS A SERIES OF TUBES. THE INTERNET IS NOT AMERICA.
yes, you do have freedom of speech, in that if you say you hate the government they can't come and arrest you. the first amendment doesn't really apply here.


this forum is not xbox live. if you don't like it, you can leave. we're not forcing you to stay. =)

[nobleclaw]

WELL IT'S NOT MY FAULT I'M ONLY 8 YEARS OLD!!!!!!!!!! I QUIT THIS IS TO COMPLICATED!!!!!!!!! Chirpy says that he has better thingss to do than chat with strict people!!!!!!!

btw.... SPAM!

[Rainwater]

...it's illegal for anyone under 13 to be on a forum. you lied about your age and now you're mad at us for expecting you to behave like the age you said you were?

good riddance.

[VANESSA]

Well that explains everything.
ok bye say hi to that gary-stu mentor you mentioned for me.

And thanks Goldfeather :B

[Nightface]

Uh... that was very odd. Should I just delete this topic or something like that. Lol, I'm seriously loling right now instead of just typing lol with a blank expression on my face; I've never seen anyone that.... weird. I feel bad for Chirpy though...

[VANESSA]

It's too funny though. I wanna keep this somehow!

[Rainwater]

you should post it under "rules" and re-title it "how not to make a character profile"

also i'd really like to see someone's eyes glow with righteousness and heroism. sounds cool.

also, i'm sorry, but what a gullible child... "chirpy got carried away and my parents found him again at the pet store! they're so smart!"
uh huh...