Ripplefur

[Ripplekit]

Your Username: Honeymelon

Name: Ripplekit
Reason for a Human name: N/A
Clan: WindClan
Occupation: Medicine Cat

Appearance: Amber eyes and a light amber coat with a couple of white splotches and one white paw. Her fur is rather curly and wavy. A medium sized she-cat.
Personality: She is very bad at expressing herself to others, though she has good intentions. For instance, she may want to tell a cat that their fur is nice and cool but she'll say that their fur is cold. She often has this feeling of being in a cage and feels lonely because of this. Despite everything, however, she puts 100% in everything that she tries to do. Tends to overexert herself and get tired easily. In addition, she is prone to losing her temper and all too often says things she doesn't mean.
Past: She was a house cat called Ripple who one day got caught by a Twoleg and placed in a cage in a dark place. This made a lasting impression on her as she often "feels as if she's in a cage". This isolation made her a bit unable to communicate properly and also emotionally scars her.
Other:

[Nightface]

The pelt is a bit impossible and you need a few more flaws in your personality. Once you fix that I'll approve this.

[Ripplekit]

How's that? I editted it~

Haha. the two flaws rule is pretty hard. xD I usually give my characters one flaw and give them a whole complex and a load of problems off that one flaw.

[Nightface]

White stripes on an amber pelt are impossible. The stripes are always a darker shade of the pelt color or black. Never white.

The two flaws rule isn't that hard once you think about it. Real people always have more than one flaw, for example, if you were to know me in real life you would quickly find out that I am somewhat unconfident and shy, I can get angry really fast at some things, I can be ambitious sometimes, and I am lazy. That's five flaws, not one.

Now that you have edited the personality, you should edit the pelt, then I will approve it.

[VANESSA]

Sorry we seem harsh, but this is the only thing we're tough on here. We don't want any marysues, plus it's more fun to read and roleplay a rounded character.

Plus, I've been on roleplays were you needed at least 10 flaws and 2 paragraphs per post. We're very different from WC.

[Rainwater]

if by light amber you mean cream, then you have darker stripes anyway (all ginger/cream cats are tabby, no exceptions... cats that appear to be solid ginger or cream have probably been selectively bred, but they're still tabby just very faintly)

white stripes are TECHNICALLY possible, due to the nature of white spotting, but they are still extremely unlikely (as in, wouldn't happen)

[Ripplekit]

Stripes?

Oh. I meant to type in splotches. xD lol. I'll go fix that.

[VANESSA]

I'll approve of this now, thanks for being patient!
You'll have a character you know took you extra time now :3

edit: I forgot to mention that I'll be adding Ripple to the WindClan list, and you can start roleplaying your new character anytime.