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Post by Swiftclaw on Dec 29, 2010 3:35:45 GMT -7
Your Username:Swiftclaw Name: Swiftpaw Clan: Thunderclan Occupation:Apperentice Appearance: Personality:Swiftpaw is a loyal member of the clan, but occationaly questions commands and acts upon instinct. He is a natural born leader, he showed this as a kit by leading the other kits on expeditions through the woods, normally ending with trouble, his answer to trouble seems to be fighting though, which is a major flaw that needs working on. Past:Swiftpaw has never met his father, and was raised by another queen because his mother died shortly after giving birth to him. He is convinced that his father is from Riverclan.(Is that an ok thing to have in the past?) Major Flaws:Occationaly acts upon instict instead of command, and solves all problems with fighting.
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Post by VANESSA on Dec 29, 2010 10:42:19 GMT -7
Yep, the bio is fine. Just note that we don't have many toms in RiverClan right now, I believe just one. And through closely reading, your character technically has 4 character flaws - which is perfect. The more-rounded, the better.
Accepted! I'll add Swiftpaw to the ThunderClan list, and you can start roleplaying at any time (:
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