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Post by viperstrike on May 25, 2011 17:18:53 GMT -7
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Your Username: Viperstrike
Character's name: Leopardclaw
Reason for a non-traditional name:
Clan: ThunderClan
Occupation:Deputy
Appearance:
Eye color: Amber
Pelt color: Tabby
Markings: Black stripes
Height: 12 inches at shoulder
Weight: 8 pounds
Personality: Leopardclaw isn't the nicest cat around, but she isn't mean either. She is kind to some, but not all. You must earn her respect, she will not just give it to you. She is a fierce warrior and despises kittypets with a passion. She was trained that they represent weakness and deserve to be shredded, though she will never really harm a kittypet to the point of near death, she isn't that harsh. But, she will not treat them lightly either. Leopardclaw is a very good actor. It is hard to tell her lies from the truth and will respect all when her leader is near, but treat those who don't have her respect like crow-food the moment her leader is away. She is an ambitious cat and will stop at nothing to achieve her goals. Leopardclaw is secretly trained by her grandfather, Tigerfang, in the Dark Forest, learning every thing he knows. Leopardclaw knows she shouldn't be in the Dark Forest, but she doesn't care. All she knows is that Tigerfang knows things she doesn't, and she wants to learn from him. Half her personality comes from him. She has his ferocity, his respect from the other warriors and other clans, she has his ambitions, she even has his looks.
Past: Leopardkit was born in ThunderClan during Green leaf, so she was well fed for her first moons. She was playful and kind, but at birth she was given to her father's clan. Her father was Hawkclaw, and he was loving and kind to her, but was harsh toward Badgerkit, her brother. It quickly became clear that Hawkclaw favored Leopardkit because she looked like him and his father Tigerfang. Her father also saw that Leopardkit was strong, and courageous. She was curious and never let her fear hold her back from anything. He admired that about his daughter and trained her basic battle moves and the hunting crouch when she was four moons old. She loved being with Hawkclaw, he made her feel loved and important, like she was the most special and important cat that ThunderClan had ever seen. Whenever Badgerkit tried to muscle in on the attention Hawkclaw would give Leopardkit, Hawkclaw would just send him away with a lash of his tail. By the time Leopardkit became Leopardpaw, she had mastered the basic battle moves and perfected her hunting crouch, with the thanks of Hawkclaw. Badgerpaw would often watch Leopardpaw and Hawkclaw, try to learn their moves, but never really perfected them. His jealousy of Leopardpaw spiked, however, when his sister was given to Hawkclaw as an apprentice. when Badgerpaw was given to a semi-lazy warrior named Splashfoot. Hawkclaw trained Leopardpaw hard, but never yelled at her for her mistakes, just corrected her. She was zoomed through her apprenticeship and became Leopardclaw. Hawkclaw was proud of Leopardclaw's achievement and gave her a nest next to his. It took another moon for Badgerpaw to become Badgerfang. He was given a nest on the outer most part of the den, away from Hawkclaw and Leopardclaw. But Leopardclaw didn't care. She had her father and his full support and got by easy with him by her side. Nobody dared to insult Leopardclaw, or even tease her about anything. With Hawkclaw as her former mentor, and her father, she was just as smart, fast, fierce, and aggressive as he was. Then, Hawkclaw died as he lived. Fighting for his ambitions. Leopardclaw still remembers him and often goes to the Dark Forest to visit him and Tigerfang.
Other: She has a scar over her left eye. It's a mark of her visits to Tigerfang is the Dark Forest.
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Post by sage on May 25, 2011 17:46:35 GMT -7
I'd accept this. It's a nice bio, but there's one thing wrong. See, this RP is in the past, right when the Clans were started. So Tigerstar and Hawkfrost weren't even thought of yet. Fix this and I'll accept.
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Post by viperstrike on May 25, 2011 17:47:59 GMT -7
But they really tie into her past. But I guess I can fix it.  |
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Post by sage on May 25, 2011 19:24:05 GMT -7
You could change her father/grandfather's names and change the background a little bit.
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Post by viperstrike on May 26, 2011 5:44:33 GMT -7
Fixed.
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Post by sage on May 26, 2011 12:34:14 GMT -7
Accepted. Welcome to TFP.
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Post by VANESSA on May 26, 2011 15:24:47 GMT -7
/hugs storme
*moves topic and adds Leopardclaw into ThunderClan*
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