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Post by Badgerrain on May 23, 2011 13:37:05 GMT -7
 BADGERRAIN
deputy of Skyclan
Badgerrain took the time to quickly groom his pelt before watching his apprentice strike. The tom wasn't worried about Dawnpaw, she showed much promise as a warrior; he was, however, worried for his clan mates. With the clans just being formed, tension was already high. Yet with two new enemy clans about; even he was starting to long for how life use to be. Badgerrain flicked his tail at Dawnpaw; a quick congratulation for her kill. " Well done; though you might want to try killing it cleaner" he said, noticing the feathers woven in with Dawnpaw's pelt.
( OOC: EKKKK! I am sorry D: I am on my ipod so I can't post very long- I hope its alright xD I promise to go back to writing a larger amount once the weather returns to normal! )
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Post by Rosestem on May 24, 2011 14:30:14 GMT -7
((No problem! Just post when you can!))
Dawnpaw listened carefully to her mentor. "Ok! I'll try to do that next time." she told her mentor, dipping her head. When she dared to look up again, her eyes were glinting with humor. Then, she started to pick feather's from her pelt. "Ugh! this will take a moon!" dawnpaw complained as she plucked the feather's out one by one. "At least it'll be soft bedding for my nest."
Sighing, she finally pulled the last feather from her pelt.
She scented the crisp air. A faint trace of mouse caught her attention. Instictively, she crept forward in her hunting crouch. Closer,and closer, until finally, she sprung.
Her paw held the mouse to the groundand she bit it spine, a deadly blow. Dawnpaw picked up the mouse and placed it at her mentor's feet. "Now I have two peices of fresh kill to bring back to the fresh-kill pile!" Dawnpaw mewed in her sweet voice.
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