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Post by Swiftclaw on Mar 21, 2011 22:54:31 GMT -7
OOC:
the Smaller Italicized writing is what is going on inside of Swiftpaw's mind at the time. Nobody can hear it.
Ex. In Swiftpaw's Head
BIC:
Swiftpaw noticing the tension made every attempt he could to get closer. While Repeating silently to himself, "If something happens I wanna be the first to strike." Not realizing that his claws were already beginning to dig into the dirt ready to attack at the first sign of a fight.
Completely upon impulse Swiftpaw chuckled at the total sense of consternation.
"Is this feeling Normal? Should I feel tempted to attack without commands? Do I belong here? Maybe I should leave?
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Post by Mapleclaw on Mar 22, 2011 16:28:35 GMT -7
She almost looked like an innocent kitten.
A sweet little kitten. A darling little baby with white socks and powdery blue eyes.
But looks were decieving. Around Violet, wreathed the thick sickening scent of rotten adder flesh and natural sodium from the cold stone lodgement of where she slept.
The VenomClan she-cat trailed after Benet-Ramsey and sat quietly beside the reddish-brown she-cat. Her pale blue eyes, ringed with a shocking yellow, blinked with excitment as she heard other cats cry out in alarm.
"VenomClan is here!" snarled the strong voice of a WindClan tom, who was Mapleclaw. He continued to growl, the speckled fur on his neck bristling.
Twistedfoot flicked his tail in dismissal. The ThunderClan medicine cat said slowly, carefully, "It is full moon - VenomClan would not fight during a gathering. It is a time of peace. They call themselves VenomClan, they call themselves warriors. To be a warrior is to follow the warrior code."
Swanfeather quivered, but not from the cold breeze or the scent of dead adder. She whispered to herself, "I-I think the gathering is over. Let us go back." She tossed a worried look at Shadowstar. What will we do if they don't follow the warrior code?
Fogwhisker snarled, "Come and fight, you filthy rouges! You have carrion as hearts, you have venom as blood, you have the cold wind as souls. You haven't even exchanged your rouge names for Clan names."
Violet giggled, her fur raising in excitment. Finally, nobody thought of her as a small little she-cat! They were AFRAID of her!
She peeked out from the thorny shrubs. Five leaders stood on the Great Rock. Riverstar, you're mine!
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Post by Nightface on Mar 24, 2011 19:14:19 GMT -7
Venomstar:
The large stone-grey cat slowly walked up to fourtrees, looking at the cats from the other clans with an arrogant grin. His deadly green eyes searched the crowd of cats, their fear-stricken gazes and their defensive snarls giving him joy. He was better than these cats, and he knew it! How dare they not invite his clan to their stupid little gathering! He leapt up onto the GreatRock, pushing aside Windstar and standing tall above the other clan-cats.
"VenomClan is a clan whether you all like it or not!" Venomstar shouted, "I find it very rude of you idiots to not invite us to your little party you have going here!"
(writer's block)
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Post by cinder on Mar 24, 2011 19:32:09 GMT -7
Cinderpaw had sat down alone at first just thinking to herself when Riverclan came into the clearing. Now she could smell the very strong scent of Venomclan and an anxiety rose in her. This was her first gathering since she was just made an apprentice but she knew that even Venomclan could cause problems at a peaceful gathering. Quickly she scanned the crowd of cats and saw Nightpaw and Silverpaw quite close to her, so she trodded over at sat next to them. Just in case some massive battle broke out she would atleast have one of her own clan to watch her back. "What do you think is gonna happen?" She whispered to the group of apprentices and then turned her gaze back to the new clan walking in.
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Post by Rosestem on Mar 24, 2011 19:52:09 GMT -7
Starstorm stared into the night sky and tried not to think about VenomClan's arrival.
"StarClan," she prayed "Can you help us? Send me a sign, prophecy, anything?"
But StarClan only said to be patient and as she stared at the sky VenomClan burst into the clearing.
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Post by Nightface on Mar 24, 2011 19:52:14 GMT -7
Silverpaw and Nightpaw:
A small grey cat walked towards Silverpaw, she obviously looked very scared. As Cinderpaw asked him and his brother what he thought would happen, Silverpaw looked over at Venomstar, who was still standing proudly over the other cats. Silverpaw then looked back at Cinderpaw, "I... I can't really say what's going to happen yet. Me and my brother have never seen a VenomClan cat before. If any of them try to hurt us then we'll be able to defend ourselves because we're apprentices." Silverpaw said this with confidence, although, truth be told, he didn't know much about fighting.
He then looked over at his brother, Nightpaw, "What do you think about this?" Silverpaw asked. Nightpaw looked very scared, probably one of the most scared cats at the gathering. His eyes were wide as he stared at the VenomClan leader, the fur on his back pricked up, and his claws were unsheathed.
"C-can we go? Now! Can we go now?!" Nightpaw asked, obviously in a panic.
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Post by cinder on Mar 24, 2011 19:58:16 GMT -7
Cinderpaw shivered mostly from how very cold it was that night and that her fur wasn't very thick but also from the sight of Venomclan and Venomstar's voice as it rang through the clearing. She saw Violet, one of the cats that was probably also an apprentice. Cinderpaw didn't know fighting like warriors did, just what would be instinctual if they were attacked. "At least it would probably all the clans against Venomclan." Cinderpaw was scared but tried to calm herself down now that she was surrounded by her own clan mates. She was glad that Silverpaw sounded confident, even if he really wasn't. " Nightpaw Shh!" She meowed worryingly to the tom. "We have to be quiet, don't want to attract attention to ourselves. I'm sure we'll be fine" She meowed and scooted closer to Nightpaw to try and comfort him and herself. Since both of their fur was grey there wasn't very much of a visible seperation between them.
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Post by Ivyshine on Mar 24, 2011 20:44:10 GMT -7
Kubrick, like a small panther, pounced into the gathering and joined his Clanmates Benet-Ramsey and Violet. There was a smirk on his face, and strong muscles rippled under his black coat. There was a mixture of different scents in the grassy clearing, but the ones that were the strongest were crow-food (from VenomClan) and the scent of fear!
He growled in satifaction as he heard apprentices whimper. They weren't ready - they thought VenomClan was neutral.
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Post by Rainlegs on Mar 24, 2011 20:57:04 GMT -7
Rainlegs watched as VenomClan entered the clearing. She could tell that every cat was shaken by their arrival, but especially the apprentices. She watched Nightpaw, Silverpaw, and Cinderpaw huddle together, their pelts ruffled. Mintpaw didn't look any better. I better have extra poppy seeds, because at this rate, no cat would be able to sleep peacefully tonight.
Cherrypetal slid out her claws as VenomClan poured into the clearing. Cats all around her were letting out yowls of fear, and pelts were bristling. She kneaded her claws in the soft soil beneath her, her mind buzzing with questions. Will a fight break out? If so, will anyone die? How would medicine cats be able to treat anyone if they get hurt? There's barely any herbs now, since it's the middle of leaf-bare.
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Post by Dawnstep on Mar 25, 2011 15:56:04 GMT -7
With a loud rustle among the bushes and Pantherclaw leaped out. The VenomClan warrior was a strong black tom with dark amber eyes. The strong warrior joined his fellow Clanmates, savoring the smell of fear-scent in the breeze.
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Post by Nightface on Mar 26, 2011 11:40:30 GMT -7
(Wait... what is VenomClan supposed to do anyways? Is there supposed to be a fight or something?)
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Post by Rosestem on Mar 28, 2011 15:31:24 GMT -7
Starstorm hissed. "VenomClan!?" she thought. " How DARE they come to OUR gathering, they don't even follow the warrior code! Or believe in StarClan!"
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Post by Nightface on Mar 28, 2011 22:57:05 GMT -7
Venomstar watched the other clans complain about his clan and insult it. They didn't take him seriously. The only way they could possibly take him seriously now is if he showed off his power, but how? VenomClan was a strong and ruthless clan; what was a better way to show off the two traits that made VenomClan better than the rest than to kill another cat? It was a great way to get others to notice his strength, and the weaker cats would fear and possibly even obey him.
"Kubrick!" Venomstar yelled impatiently, looking over at the small black cat; certainly he'd be the cat for the job, "Kill the cat nearest to you." his voice was smooth, almost as if he had rehearsed this, done it before, and enjoyed it.
He heard cries of shock from a few of the cats in the crowd.
"I'm only doing this so you fools will know just how serious VenomClan is!" he hissed, "We're a clan too, and if you don't agree with that, then you'll end up like the poor kitty that's going to die!"
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Post by VANESSA on Mar 29, 2011 17:52:11 GMT -7
Morningeyes stared in shock at Venomstar, hardly registering anything the silvery gray tom had said. The VenomClan leader simply had toxic-green eyes that could root any cat to the ground like helpless prey. StarClan help us! she desperately thought, since no words could be uttered from her lips. Morningeyes was simply paralyzed with a mixture of fear and... respect?
"Kill the closest cat to you!"
The WindClan deputy let out a piercing, bloodcurdling shriek and her heart skipped several beats as it pumped ice-cold blood, realizing that she was directly adjacent to Kubrick.
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Post by Banana King on Mar 30, 2011 11:33:59 GMT -7
Treepaw:
I felt my throat clog as foaming spit gurgled from my mouth. I cried in pain as something stabbed through my stomach and the world grew darker. My body struggled helplessly as the foam surrounded me as everything went utterly black.
Wolfpaw:
I screamed as blood spattered across the grass as a small hole opened in Treepaw's pelt. I looked around and salw nothing pierce his skin. I felt a sharp feeling in my neck as a sensation of warm ran down my neck.
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